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Hey Tamir, how are you? I hope that you're okay. I'm sorry that I haven't written for a while, I was really busy with some english assignments. (You're "jumping" too quickly. First ask your friend some questions about his life and then write general things about yourself, and connect this to this late sentence) I want to tell you about something funny that happened to me.

My friend and I were walking on our way to school when we saw two kids fighting. One of them said to the other one "You came out of an encyclopedia!" and the other one said to the first one "You look like a pig!". My friend and I kept walking and laughed at them, (new sentence)my friend said "Wow they really are the most creative idiots I've ever heard". I responded "Oh really? well, you came out of an encyclopedia!" and laughed some more. Then when we almost got to school some really old lady came to me and asked what time is it(it was) while trying to pickpocket me,(new sentence) I told her what time is it(it was) and said "Mrs. if you want to pickpocket someone you should ask someone to do that for you" and smiled. The old lady acted like a gang member and said "Give me all of your money or I'll kick your ass!". I decieded to ignore that lady since I was almost late for school.

When I finally got to school and walked into my class I saw the most hated bully in school, I used to call him "The arm breaker" because mostly he said things that were conected(sp.) to arms breaking. He was standing on my table, and was writing on the ceiling, suddenly he fell from the table on a bunch of chairs. He kept shouting "Oh my god, I broke my arm!!! help! ahhhhh" I couldn't help myself and started to laugh at him. - I don't see the connection between all the incidents that you're describing here. All you're doing is telling your friend what happened to you on a certain day, but the events have no connection and I fail to understand why they "made your week". Is it because they made you laugh? Is it because of something else? I don't get it.

That day made my week. Well, tell me about your day, I hope it was better than mine. I guess that I'll see you soon.

Guy.

Let's Kill Some Time!

Many scientists believe that time travel is possible by using wormholes. According to the theory of relativity a person that moves fast enough to open a wormhole will basicly open a portal to a different period of time and the wormhole will be it's gate. Let's say that two people that are in the same age are holding hands and one of them is going into a wormhole. The person that went into the wormhole will go out after a period of time while the other person will grow much older than the person that came out of the wormhole. because when the person went into the wormhole time moved slowly while for the person that waits for the person that went into the wormhole time moved normally.

Atomic clock is basicly the most exact clock that has been ever made. It is based on atomic energy levels that create a repitive signal that almost has no changes in it and by counting the changes it is possible to know what time is it.

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Atomic clocks are used to show what time is it in some of the communication companies such as some of the television companies and the cellphone companies. - You need to specify more about this. This text is not enough to understand the device.

Daphna.





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Writing Assignemt No.3: describing a place

I would like to tell you about an amazing city in Spain called Barcelona. The spoken language in Barcelona is spanish and the streets look the same except for the center of the city that is basicly a big traffic circle. Near the center of the city there's a beautiful fountain that lights the streets with the colors of a rainbow.

I recommand that if you ever visit in Barcelona also go to the Dali museum and see Salvador Dali's amazing arts. Another magnificent place that I think that you should visit if you're there is a place called Empuriabrava. Empuriabrava is located by the shore and it's main source of income is in giving tourists tours in the place with their boats. If you get to Empuriabrava notice the unique style of constructing.

And to conclude Barcelona is a great place to visit in and don't forget the most important thing:
choose a hotel carefuly because the way the spanish people give their hotels stars is not the same way the israelis do which may cause a few problems if you don't do as a I recomend.

Writing Assignment No.2

I would like to talk about my twin sister, Reut. As I said Reut is my twin sister, she is 15 years old and she was born one minute after me. Reut and I also have a brother named Roey. Reut is a kind person that would help anyone and would want nothing back.

Reut is interested in a youth movement that is called HaNoar HaOved VeHaLomed and she is a counselor in that youth movement.

Reut and I were born in Jerusalem. When Reut and I were 2 years old we moved to Holon from Tel-Aviv. Reut and I were in the same kindergarten when we were 4 years old and were in the same classes in the elementary school, in the Jr. High and in the High school.

I am very glad that I have a sister like Reut that cares about me so much. I would never want to replace her and I will do anything that I can to make her happy.- This is a good ending.

Gur, You write well, but always too short. Don't be afraid to give a deeper analysis of your sister. You haven't written anything about her personality and nearly anything about her interests. The reader does not get a good idea about your sister accoring to this essay.

Daphna.

I know and I'm really trying to make it a bit longer, so I'll try harder.

First Writing Assignment

Hello my name is Guy Shiran and I'm 15 years old. I have brown hair and green eyes. In my spare time I like to play computer games, to watch TV, to hang out with my friends and I like to sleep. I like to go to the movies with my friends and to play computer games like Maple Story with them.

What I like about school is that most of the teachers are nice and will help me if I ask for their help. I don't like the idea of school because it makes people think that studying is the most important thing in the world. Although I like some interesting subjects like Biology, Physics, Chemistry, mainly because they are really interesting. I expect to learn a lot this coming year.

To conclude I'm excited about this year. It is going to be a really important step in my life and I'll do my best and I'll work hard to get better than last year.