Writing Assignment No.2

I would like to talk about my twin sister, Reut. As I said Reut is my twin sister, she is 15 years old and she was born one minute after me. Reut and I also have a brother named Roey. Reut is a kind person that would help anyone and would want nothing back.

Reut is interested in a youth movement that is called HaNoar HaOved VeHaLomed and she is a counselor in that youth movement.

Reut and I were born in Jerusalem. When Reut and I were 2 years old we moved to Holon from Tel-Aviv. Reut and I were in the same kindergarten when we were 4 years old and were in the same classes in the elementary school, in the Jr. High and in the High school.

I am very glad that I have a sister like Reut that cares about me so much. I would never want to replace her and I will do anything that I can to make her happy.- This is a good ending.

Gur, You write well, but always too short. Don't be afraid to give a deeper analysis of your sister. You haven't written anything about her personality and nearly anything about her interests. The reader does not get a good idea about your sister accoring to this essay.

Daphna.

I know and I'm really trying to make it a bit longer, so I'll try harder.