The Long Goodbye is a drama book, written by ____________ . The book is about a private investigator that gets close to a bum, and gets in trouble because of him. Generally I liked the idea of the book just as an idea, but as a book it was awful.
The main characters in the book were ordinary, boring and full of suffer(ww.) as watching a sleeping person for a whole night with no option to leave. The main character is Peter Marlow, a private investigator, that should've minded his own business, (Start a new sentence) (He) finds a bum sitting in the street with his weird wife. Obviously Marlow got(gr. - use the present) curious and as I said in the first paragraph, that's what got him into a few troubles(phr. - trouble).
Very promising....but where us the rest?
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Daphna
Thursday, October 22, 2009
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
This Is Serious
Iranian President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad said at(ww.) september 21, 2009 he was proud he had managed to enrage the West by denying the Holocaust during a speech he made in Tehran in honor of Jerusalem day.
Mahmoud Ahmadinejad is obviously trying to disturb the israeli efforts to stop the wars and the tension in the area. Israel has to contradict Ahmadinejad's words as soon as possible. If Israel doesn't do it, its reputation could be damaged.
Also, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad supports terror and wants to destroy Israel, America and probably a few europian countries, and a person that supports terror isn't so different from the actual terrorists. Therefore Ahmadinejad shouldn't be trusted.
To conclude, there must be done something immidietly(wo.) about Ahmedinejad's words before it gets even more dangerous, and before he convinces more people that Israel is a devilish country.
The link for this Article: http://www.ynetnews.com/articles/0,7340,L-3779539,00.html
Very good work!
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Daphna
Mahmoud Ahmadinejad is obviously trying to disturb the israeli efforts to stop the wars and the tension in the area. Israel has to contradict Ahmadinejad's words as soon as possible. If Israel doesn't do it, its reputation could be damaged.
Also, Mahmoud Ahmadinejad supports terror and wants to destroy Israel, America and probably a few europian countries, and a person that supports terror isn't so different from the actual terrorists. Therefore Ahmadinejad shouldn't be trusted.
To conclude, there must be done something immidietly(wo.) about Ahmedinejad's words before it gets even more dangerous, and before he convinces more people that Israel is a devilish country.
The link for this Article: http://www.ynetnews.com/articles/0,7340,L-3779539,00.html
Very good work!
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Daphna
It's about time
Gilad Shalit is an israeli soldier that was kidnapped on June 25, 2006. When he was kidnapped he was 20 years old, and now he is 23 years old and still being kept imprisoned by the Hamas terror organization in Gaza.
The family of Gilad Shalit has suffered for too long, their pain is beyond undarstanding and they are desperate to bring him back .This issue could have been solved a long time ago if the government seriously tried to make a deal with the Hamas and bring Gilad back. The government must do whaterver it can to make sure that its citizens are safe and if they're not safe, it's the governemt's duty to make them safe even if the price is high.
The Gilad Shalit's issue also causes a decrease in the citizens' ability to trust the government's will to protect and serve. People don't want to go to the army anymore because they're afraid that if they're captured, the government just won't work hard enough to bring them back and that their lives are going to be ruined.
To conclude, Gilad has suffered a lot and we can just imagine how bad he feels in that place where he's being kept. The government should just pay the price to release him and get this over with. Gilad and his family aren't the only ones suffering from that situation, Israel suffers too.
The link for this article: http://jewishvoiceandopinion.com/a/JVO20090303.html
Good work.
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Daphna
Now, use this summary to write a letter to the editor.
Daphna
The family of Gilad Shalit has suffered for too long, their pain is beyond undarstanding and they are desperate to bring him back .This issue could have been solved a long time ago if the government seriously tried to make a deal with the Hamas and bring Gilad back. The government must do whaterver it can to make sure that its citizens are safe and if they're not safe, it's the governemt's duty to make them safe even if the price is high.
The Gilad Shalit's issue also causes a decrease in the citizens' ability to trust the government's will to protect and serve. People don't want to go to the army anymore because they're afraid that if they're captured, the government just won't work hard enough to bring them back and that their lives are going to be ruined.
To conclude, Gilad has suffered a lot and we can just imagine how bad he feels in that place where he's being kept. The government should just pay the price to release him and get this over with. Gilad and his family aren't the only ones suffering from that situation, Israel suffers too.
The link for this article: http://jewishvoiceandopinion.com/a/JVO20090303.html
Good work.
(90)
Daphna
Now, use this summary to write a letter to the editor.
Daphna
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