38 Hatzionut Street
Holon
October 12, 2009
Cyber-Angels Organization
14 flower street
Tel-Aviv
Dear Sir/Madam,
I read(gr. - use the present perfect) about your organization and I would like to apply for the job of a cyber-angel. The reason for me to apply for this job is that I hear about people getting harrased on the internet every day and I think it's about time I do something about it, after all
This is a good beginning, you should have completed your letter.
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Daphna
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