An application for college

17 Hatzionut Street

Holon

April 29, 2010




Dean(מיותר)

Harvard university

19 Saints Street

New York





Dear Sir/Madam,



My name is Guy Shiran, I'm an eighteen year-old student in Kugel High School, Holon and I would like to apply for admission to your school. I've always been interested in going to Harvard and now the time has come. I would like to apply for the biochemistry course. I think you'll be impressed by my grades average, and I don't see a reason for me not to be accepted(phr. - this is not suitable).



I would like to study in Harvard because of it's reputation. Most of Harvard graduates are famous researchers and Nobel Prize achievers.


This is a very good opening. It's too bad you couldn't find the time to complete your work.

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Daphna

USA is calling

12 Homeless Street
Holon
April, 1, 2010

Manager
"See The World" Travel Agency
66 Shlomo Street
New York



Dear Sir/Madam,



I am a 17 year old student, and I'd like to go on an organized tour to the United States. I deeply enjoy traveling and traveled around the world many times over the years. I read your advertisement and I would like to get some information about the tour.

I want to go on a tour that would interest me and would interest other teenagers. It has to be fun and modern, like visiting a The Millitary Museum in Washington DC, some malls, resteraunts and more. It would make me happy if you send me the information about tours that include the things I mentioned, and about the guiding staff you probably have, that can guide us in the USA and about security.

Also, I would like to know how much a tour like that should cost if I choose traveling with your agency and then I'll decide if it is worth it or not, and would very appreciate it if you gave me some information about the weather in the USA and recommanded what kind of clothes I should bring for this trip.

Please reply as soon as possible, I'm looking forward to go on this tour and don't want to miss this chance.

Truly yours,
Hom Less.

(87)
Daphna

A seggestion

1 Hatzionut Street
Holon
April 1, 2010

Manager
Holon's local radio station,
89 Fake Street
Holon


Dear Sir/Madam,


My name is Guy and I'm an 11th grader in Kugel high school. I've read that you intent(ww. - intend) to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers and as a great fan of your radio station I would like to send in my suggestion.

I suggest that you produce a satiric show about Israeli teachers and students that will present them in a ridiculous form. Such a show should creatisize(sp.) the problematic situation between students and teachers, and I believe it would be a great way of making students understand their place and teachers realize what to do in order to be as respected as they can.

In my opinion, producing such a show is one of the greatest solutions to the educational problem in the area. It could make teenagers realize they can help each other and the community in different ways, better ways. This show would make students creatisize(sp.) their friends' and their very own behaviour.
Therefore, I believe it is very important to produce such a show and change the way teenagers think and act by creatisizing(sp.) themselves. It will help achieving(gr. - achieve) mutual respect between teenagers and grown-ups.

To conclude, I believe a show like this one is necessary if we want to achieve our goal, to make teenagers and grown-ups respect each other as equals. I'm certain that many teenagers will be thrilled about having the opportunity to listen to such a show on the radio.

Sincerely yours,

Arthur Rid.

Well done!
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