Wednesday, April 14, 2010

A seggestion

1 Hatzionut Street
Holon
April 1, 2010

Manager
Holon's local radio station,
89 Fake Street
Holon


Dear Sir/Madam,


My name is Guy and I'm an 11th grader in Kugel high school. I've read that you intent(ww. - intend) to produce a series of one-hour programs for teenagers and as a great fan of your radio station I would like to send in my suggestion.

I suggest that you produce a satiric show about Israeli teachers and students that will present them in a ridiculous form. Such a show should creatisize(sp.) the problematic situation between students and teachers, and I believe it would be a great way of making students understand their place and teachers realize what to do in order to be as respected as they can.

In my opinion, producing such a show is one of the greatest solutions to the educational problem in the area. It could make teenagers realize they can help each other and the community in different ways, better ways. This show would make students creatisize(sp.) their friends' and their very own behaviour.
Therefore, I believe it is very important to produce such a show and change the way teenagers think and act by creatisizing(sp.) themselves. It will help achieving(gr. - achieve) mutual respect between teenagers and grown-ups.

To conclude, I believe a show like this one is necessary if we want to achieve our goal, to make teenagers and grown-ups respect each other as equals. I'm certain that many teenagers will be thrilled about having the opportunity to listen to such a show on the radio.

Sincerely yours,

Arthur Rid.

Well done!
(95)

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