Friends

One of the most important things in the world, according to most of the people are their friends.
It is an instict of people to team up with and surrond themselves with the ones they like and have a common denominator, and most people try to find special qualities in those friends.

In my opinion, the most important quality in friends is being trust-worthy, because you can't always rely on your own skills and you need the assistance of another person. A few more qualities friends should have is being good listeners and helpful when needed because with no listening there can be no real connection with anyone. The only conversation that can exist in such terms is a one-side one.

Moreover, friends often critisize us and tell us that we are wrong when no one else will. With no friends we would keep doing those mistakes that we never notice ourselves. They back us up when we need them and support us when we have a hard time.

To conclude, I think friends are great for just being there. With no friends we would be a bunch of lonely and bitter sociopaths. Without them there would be no one to catch us when we fall and when it ever happens it is going to hurt. I honestly believe they make us happier and more positive about this world and the people living in it.

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An issue that concerns everyone, especially teenagers, is the fact that student's aren't involved enough in their communities. Surprisingly or not, a research shows that it mostly happens in highly developed cities and societies. It is also important to say that there are many people that think there is nothing wrong with it. I am not one of them and I'd like to suggest a few ways to deal with it.

For one thing, most students are in a phase of depression and confusion. They think they are alone and that adults will never understand them, therefore they want no connection with the people around them. In order to get to them and make them involved in the community it is necessary to make them trust adult people. That is possible by organizing courses that will teach teachers and parents how to gain students' respect. That will make the students more open-minded and they will be ready to open up to the community.

Another way of dealing (with) this issue is by using what students like to educate them to be involved in their communities(phr. - not clear what you mean). That can be done by having concerts, festivals, parades and more. It will prove (to) the students that the community has something to offer them and they will be interested in becoming a part of it.

To conclude, if adults offer studetns and teenagers some attraction(s) and show their understanding, the students will open up for new ideas such as(where is the rest???)


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